maybe try some copper in the red layer - thats the eyecatcher here - plus it looks like a nice blocky screen that could take a lower mesh count... ONLY a suggestion... I reckon this is a corker anyhow. And Bear is super nice, but I wouldn't trust that Chris as far as I could flick him - haha
Rhys will be pleased to have got some recent praise on this what with his admission from the recent series - but he has been torn on poster deals for a spell - he does pretty well getting his commissions mainly. Seen something new on his site actually - some Psycho Rhino Monk, its good and characteristically heavy.