I think that the idea behind this poster is pretty cool, but the type is lacking. Its not even the font that you chose..its the fact that there is no meaning or idea in its placement...the perspective is non existent and the okkervil text looks as if it was an afterthought. It has no relation to what else is happening. Also the date doesn't even line up properly to the beam of red thats coming out. If thats not what you were going for then you failed to get across what you were going for. I wouldn't think it has so much to do with "indie cred" and maybe listen and learn...thats how you get better.