eh...somethings not right here. cant pin what it is.
LINE WIDTH. thats it. yes, you touch upon it in her face but nowhere else. gotta keep a consistancy to your style. that bottom text is really just thrown on there too. you could make it more interesting.
thanks everyone! i love each and every one of you. i have yet to attempt to print these. im sure its going to be an adventure. this is one of my favorites ive done lately. (might be getting toy'd too, woo!).