That's very nice. Hard to read at first but inventive. I would like it to be a very large print. The tag at the bottom could go away or just be minimal, just to leave the greater image alone to be as cool as it is.
I had this grand scheme for a rougher look and this scanned typewrite text and this dry brush art and and and...like the 'thug' shooting range targets these are supposed to resemble. You can even shoot at them later if you want.