Go look at Zach Hobbs posters and attempt to replicate that shit. You don't have to do it well, just do it often and get your classmates to do the same so it totally kills that shit and it becomes passe and I don't have to look at it anymore.
the positioning of the text in the black boxes is throwing me off a bit...it looks a little too close to the top of the boxes. at least center the text in the one covering her eyes. also there's three little random dots along the left side where the black box comes into the picture. they should go away. other than that, it's not bad. it does what it's supposed to do.