Poster Critique

[regularjohndesign]

It's still a work in progress, but I don't know if it's "working". What do you think? I know I need to fix the chalk outline.

[iamthesleepwalker]

lose the typeface immediately.
if you want a distressed/grungey font then hand draw it or digitally mess up an existing font one letter at a time (use impact if you want a similar undistressed font to the one you've got there (except don't use impact cuz it's gross))

[regularjohndesign]

I hate the type too, but it's the band's "logo". Thanks

[DenisMutter]

I guess it depends on the aesthetic you're going for - digital or "screen-printy".

[Zach Hobbs]

i would just switch the shit so the girl on the ground looks like she's on the ground. the logo is messing all that up.

[Zach Hobbs]

meaning move it to the top.

[mikeage]

It kind of looks like she has five fingers, but no thumb.
Definitely make the chalk line thicker.

[taliban]

make her look dead if she's supposed to be dead. right now, she looks like a really cute haute couture ad model for jean paul gaultier perfume or something. then again, this is coming from someone who makes everything macabre...

[hartman]

make her look dead if she's supposed to be dead. right now, she looks like a really cute haute couture ad model for jean paul gaultier perfume or something. then again, this is coming from someone who makes everything macabre...

Pretty people die too.

[Brad]

the hair is not messed up for someone laying down.