Design Critique

[destroy]

I'm working on this poster for Death From Above. I'm not 100% on it. What do you guys think?

[Kotah]

I'm into it.

[lil_tuffy]

The half-tone drops out of her torso and arms pretty harshly.

Also, upside down crosses are like the new birds and DFA is not very black metal.

[destroy]

good point about the halftone on the arms.. i will definitely adjust that.
thanks.

[lil_tuffy]

and you should probably put the city and maybe the state on it as well. There's probably a lot of venues called "Metro"

[Iron Canvas Studios]

Diggin it, maybe try beefing up the line weight of the type just a tiny bit?

[destroy]

Diggin it, maybe try beefing up the line weight of the type just a tiny bit?

thanks. i will try that.
i checked out your work. you have a lot of really cool pieces. I'm a fan.

[slater]

The placement of the triangle on her bum is perfect. I'd make the Metz bar stop right at her mouth... so raise all the type up a bit and see if you can maintain balance in the composition. People won't see that subtlety immediately, but it's there if they want to keep looking...

[jova]

dope.

[CloneArmy]

Tangent with the pink rectangle and the horn. Not a big deal, but it irks me, a bit.
I second the vote to axe the inverted cross. The eyes, or absence thereof, are evil enough.