Design Critique

[DRG]

Tangent with the pink rectangle and the horn. Not a big deal, but it irks me, a bit.

Seconding the tangent issue, they irk me too.

[standard]

The treatment of the pink is distressed/fake screen print, and the black is a clean halftone. I have nothing against mixing the two treatments, but to have them next to each other doesn't float my proverbial boat as it were.

[zlandrum]

but does it tickle your proverbial pickle?

[El Roacho]

her horns aren't on straight

[destroy]

hey guys,
i want to thank everyone for the input. i got way more responses than i expected. this was super helpful, i definitely took some of your tips (and i ignored some...) i started hand screening these a few days ago. i will post some pictures tonight of the process and the final product.

[destroy]

here are some in progress pics. all in all it turned out really well. not bad for my first time screening.
i have a few extras, so if anyone wants one... let me know
john@destroydesigns.com

thanks again GP for your help.

[destroy]

You're getting paid to develop a site, but you want someone to do the work for you? How much are you offering?xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

uh... what?

for anyone interested.. this is now selling here:
Destroy Designs / Graphic Design

[boatdreams]

I saw this in the Reader. It was poster of the week. Nice!

[julia green]

Tangent with the pink rectangle and the horn. Not a big deal, but it irks me, a bit.
I second the vote to axe the inverted cross. The eyes, or absence thereof, are evil enough.

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