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Old 10-08-2009, 12:29 PM
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Default First Poster Critique.... revision1

I didn't realize there was a specific place to get poster critiques on the forums until just now....
but I had received some critique from other illustrationf Forums I posted at and this is what I have came up with.
It is going to be Screenprinted... I just sent the print file out... but if I can receive any critique now I may be able to change it up before it goes to print...

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Old 10-08-2009, 12:32 PM
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I would draw out the bottom text too...but besides that its pretty cool.
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Old 10-08-2009, 12:33 PM
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I'd say draw the type at the bottom instead. Otherwise it looks pretty cool.
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I expected that would happen...
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everything is super badass...
except for that type at the bottom. It looks sorely slapped on.
If you can hand do it like Antipop or even the "and guests" it would rock much better.
And place it a bit better than at the VERY bottom.
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Old 10-08-2009, 12:39 PM
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i think the bottom text would look good just scrawled along the bottom edge.

im probably wrong.
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Def w the txt
I'm guessing your printing for display since event has passed?

I checked out your T's the other day...fuckin solid
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thanks for the advice guys... I will make the hand drawn revisions.. placement of the information text though is somethign I am struggling with... centered and at the very bottom isn't a good choice? should I fill in the clouded area a bit more with the info text. I was thinking if I did that it would take away from that sky negative space area. let me see what I can come up with..
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Def w the txt
I'm guessing your printing for display since event has passed?

I checked out your T's the other day...fuckin solid

It's in European format. It's in Nov.
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