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08-19-2009, 10:29 PM
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Have this due tomorrow and wanted some advice on anything I can improve or that you hate.
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08-19-2009, 10:36 PM
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"free copy of the debut self titled album with purchase of a ticket" reads a little clumsy...but I'm no copy writer. It seems like that could be shortened. I suppose thats exactly what they asked you to print on there...
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08-19-2009, 10:51 PM
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go premium, then we will crit you.
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08-19-2009, 11:23 PM
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Remove secondary tiny dropshadow underneath band's name (or am I just seeing a trap?), remove thick blue underline below bands name. Shorten "free album tagline". Center said tagline. What's the signifigance of the van? If you can add something more interesting, nix it. If not, halftone? Something to make said van more interesting?
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09-02-2009, 08:11 PM
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Try adjusting the mask of the back right and front left tires. Maybe just refine the edge a little bit to make it a little smoother.
Also, I would try using a different color besides dark gray for the 3d type. Or maybe just get rid of it.
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