Opinions on a T-shirt design I've done for my band

[Dan Bowden Design]

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Hey, not sure whether to have a solid background or a halftoney circular effect in the background for the sky.....we're going to get 2 colours printed only, so no more colours are an option for us...

Also wonder if anyone could provide me with any feedback / ideas to make it better, bearing in mind I have limitations both illustrating and with software...the writing was all handwritten and incorporated into the picture so I can't change the style of writing or font.....

Was considering having some a line/lyric of one of our songs either at the top of bottom...but wasn't sure if that would spoil it....

any ideas / feedback would be really appreciated.

cheers

dan

EDIT

btw - going to be BIG, i.e. most the front side of a t - shirt so the writing band name bit stands out well enough when it's that size....I've checked that already....

[8ball]

you might want to include some sort of link to your bands music....

otherwise I would say this sucks balls...

[8ball]

you might want to include some sort of link to your bands music....

otherwise I would say this sucks balls...

...,skldh


BALLS!!!!

[El Negro Magnifico!]

I'm liking the solid sky version.

[Dan Bowden Design]

sucks balls

I quite like it, just think it might need a little tuning....

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[Dan Bowden Design]

I'm liking the solid sky version.

ok, thanks dude - just wondered - this much solid print - might be a sweatfest to wear?

[MaximumFluoride]

I can tell exactly what type of band you are without even listening. Perfect.

[MaximumFluoride]

And after listening I am surprised by how you sound. I'm not sure the visuals match the sound. Both are good but.....not matching up.

[Dan Bowden Design]

ah really? what kind of style would you think fits more with how we sound?

- obv I've got my own style/limitations when it comes to the art stuff so maybe what i do doesn't fit with what we do, but I'm not sure I'd be *able* to come up with something more 'us' sounding - whatever style that may be.....thing is, as the bands not a serious venture, just a few of us having fun, we don't really want to spend money having someone else design our stuff as it's a money losing venture as it is!...

[DRG]

I think knife crime is a real problem in our country, and probably not something to joke about on those funny tshirts they wear.