Need some Advice on this illustration im working on.

[Killer Napkins]

Hey, I got to a point where I am wondering what to do with this illustration.. So I figured I would ask the pros.

Im working on an art print design for an upcoming show. In my mind I had this character idea, and initially thought a mountain scape BG would be a good idea. Now I thought maybe that is kind of boring, because of the negative space I left was awkward to work with to me.



this was the second mountain range that I liked and am leaning more towards.

then I thought a loosely drawn out beach scene would be funny...

then other ideas popped in my head, like working with the title of my show "Like a Beer in Deadlights" or "LABIDL"

I know first thoughts are usually the best, but I wanted to get some other opinions...Any other crit would be cool too. Just looking to keep it black and white though..

thanks!

[doggydoodle]

I think an office scene would look nice.

[Killer Napkins]

Ha that would be pretty bitchin'... reminds me of that scene in Scrooged

[Barry Obama]

redraw that hand. it looks all wrong

[mikeage]

Yeah, either the hand or the position of the gun.

Office or woods, not beach.

[Killer Napkins]

yeah both the hands looked fucked up to me... gotta fix that... im thinkin i may swing the woods, i think it'll be easier to show depth with the background if i did the woods

[Southtown Press]

[steve w]

IRS Office

[ricv64]

change the negative space to above and not have a white background ?

[MrBlonde7]

Background: Tony Hayward against a concrete wall with bullseye behind him.

Satirical social commentary!