Need some Advice on this illustration im working on.

[scrojo]

redraw that hand. it looks all wrong

i'd just ditch the hand and the gun at this point ( plus the other hand and everything lower than the smokes ). the skull looks great and the suit and smokes leave a nice vague commentary for the viewer to personally define.

less is more.

[squeegeethree]

Background should be a hall of mirrors.

[Killer Napkins]

Alright thanks for all the input so far.... I gave some suggestions a try..

I Kind of am feeling this one...

I went with scrojo suggestion... though I am not sure what to do with a crop like that.. I could work in the show title somehow and add some other interesting design elements

fixed the Gun and hand on the gun and added a strap to this one so I didnt have to fuck with the weird angle of the hand holding the gun up... I am kinda diggin the scribbley loose tree mountain landscape...

will probably fuck with the 3rd one some more and go with that (fix beer can hand etc.)... I need to get this to the printer soon .. any other suggestions?

[Mark McCormick]

the hand looks better but seems like the outline of the hand should match the thickness of the outline on the gun. pretty trivial tho...

nice work!

[MrBlonde7]

Tonyhaywardmurderrulez!!!

[Southtown Press]

What if you rotated the figure in the cropped one about 30 degrees clockwise... and fixed the tie to hang straight, of course...

[ferg2001]

why are the arm and hand tiny now?

[Killer Napkins]

ahh shit.. yeah they are ridiculously small in comparison now... some changes will be made.

[goad74]

weird tangent that makes the skull look like it's resting on the gun. Although judging by the shadow maybe that's what it's doing.....

[Killer Napkins]

not intentional... the weird tangent... Let me beef up that shadow