thanks folks. i like constructive criticism, so thanks for that too.
i wanted a fairly generic/faceless look for the Bobby so that in relationship to the band's last album title, one cop is more of a symbol of what that mob is up against. i sort of can't stand direct/obvious imagery for my posters. redrawing it might have been cool and i do that alot with photo/images, so i hear you. regarding the type, i use non-scripts about 95% of the time and wanted some'n different and more old-fashioned. it seems overly-wrought, which again fits that which a mob might ttry to tear down. since my name ain't Horkey there is no WAY i'd try to write a script and my typical hand-drawn type styles wouldn't really work, or so i thought.
probably i think about the internal logic of my posters way too much.
im gonna get critical. hopefuly constructively.
I like the idea of the image, i think its a super strong graphic. But i cant get around that it looks so "live traced". I think it would have been killer if you had just redrawn it by hand (either out side of the computer or in illustrator).