I like everything except the decision to color her butt/way-upper-thigh the gray shadow color instead of pink. It blends in with the shadow on the bed and confuses my simple eye.
Thanks gang. Allan, my "unique" line isn't really that unique (but thank you) ... i owe an awful lot to my friend and mentor George Pratt (everybody look up georgepratt.com and be blown away) who shaped my approach to drawing more than anyone. And George took a lot from Jeffrey Jones and Barron Storey and put his own spin on things. It's all one big melting pot of influences out there, isn't it?