My comments for this would be exactly the same as my comments on the Squad19 poster.
Overall I like it. I think the basic concept is dead on. I might have used different colors, but you know... whatever. Like, maybe the gold I would have used silver and printed it on black paper. The "metal" trifecta of black, red, silver would have sent this over the top for sure.
Nice job though. I'd be stoked to have one.