Joanna Wecht :

reminds me of the sifl and olie show

2006-12-15 21:40:26

John A :

I'm in yer arms, bitin' off yer hedz.

2006-12-15 21:26:23

John A :

I changed my mind. i love it.

2006-12-15 21:25:48

John A :

I almost love this one.

2006-12-15 21:24:51

little mrbill :

yeah, I thought about doing it hand drawn but was in a hurry, and I'll make a note to work on layouts for text and things of that sort. I greatly appreciate the advice.

2004-06-17 13:04:04

whiteyhouston :

the head is off the neck!

2004-06-17 12:29:17

bdix :

For one, it would have been a lot sweeter if the illo was hand drawn and scanned in. Rigth now it's too "Illustrator". The text needs work...not so much the typeface, but the layout. And this is just me, but the text bubble needs to be smooth and round. Colors are good, layout is nice, and the concept is off the hook.

2004-06-17 12:18:08

little mrbill :

what's missing? what could I do to make it better, I'm always looking for advice and detailed opinions.

2004-06-17 12:08:59

bdix :

The potential for this one to be bangin' is there.

2004-06-17 08:56:32

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