ey Bart...it looks pretty good to me..ya might wanna mess around with the size of you "elements" try making the text a differnt size as the drawin'??? hell i dont know...good to see ya doing stuff. I met you at a kinkos on burnett i think a year or two ago and asked about the lettering on one of your posters for emos...i was the hopped up on coffee and smokes duffas printing out half tone like generic old time adds...for a anual report assignment. keep on keepin on man.
im gonna comment in my own poster just so i can see what others think of it. my first poster i was accually paid to design,in cash,not some form of band merch or free to shows,than god for doing these posters i havent had to pay to get into Emo's in like 2 years.