I think the type is fine. It is true that there is probably somthing better out there. But for a flyer done in about three hours, I think you chose well under the pressure.
True that, HYNES, about the fragility and the strong blocks of text, etc. Like this.
thanks for the crit... this piece was done in a matter of minutes due to the band informing me of the job that afternoon and wanting 200 of these copied and cut out in a matter of about 3 hours. For the record the typeface is Helvetica Inserta and not impact. And you should also know that these were the size of postcards and print on 4 different colors of paper and hung as a set of four different colors. but that dosent make up for the lack of originality in the type.