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DESIGNER:
Jay Vollmar  
VENUE:
Larimer Lounge
Denver
CO
USA
 
SUBMITTED BY:
Jay  
2003-05-02 20:19:51
 
BANDS:
Whirlwind Heat
Omens, The
Geds, The



Whirlwind Heat Poster - Larimer Lounge, Denver - Jay Vollmar



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n8wSend n8w a message :   sweeeeeet!   2004-03-04 15:32:01
modrocket10Send modrocket10 a message :   this man has talent! I got this in the mail today and love it! Thanks J   2004-02-04 15:15:32
craveSend crave a message :   Jay, you're one talented individual. I'm not sure what is your more recent stuff, but personally I really dig the work you're doing with the muted colors. This one, the flower, the girl with the neck, the fire demon person and the rest are just killer.   2003-06-13 09:23:07
thinkmuleSend thinkmule a message :   beaut. :happy:   2003-05-28 23:51:49
PediniSend Pedini a message :   I just got this and few others of Jay's in the mail. He is by far one of the most talented people working today. Amazing stuff!   2003-05-19 10:47:09
pezzonovanteSend pezzonovante a message :   The text works for me because the whole thing is very Ben Shahn inspired. In fact, where did this text face come from? Shahn had the coolest lettering style (as on the cover of his book The Shape of Content) ever, and every once in a while I see something like this. Did someone make a Ben Shahn font?
The raw white shape in back is great, especially the way it looks under the yellow. The whole thing looks like a stencil too, which would be pretty fun to put up around a city...
  2003-05-06 12:30:31
jasoncrossSend jasoncross a message :   i think it works as is, but you could have also played with the text more...though I do like it as is.
So hard to say what should or shouldnt be done...only the designer/artist can get a feel for that because they are the ones within the creative process...he may have tried other text just to find out it did not work as well. More than anything when I crit I am looking for skill and competence in the work...not necessarily the creative directions chosen, because those can be almost imp[ossible to extrapalate and understand outside of that of the design him or herself.
  2003-05-05 09:06:33
MeelooSend Meeloo a message :   .... i don't agree with Finch.... i like the way you treat the text.... i also like the way it's printed....   2003-05-05 09:04:05
DeliciousSend Delicious a message :   i agree with Finch - but i really like what you've got going on otherwise.   2003-05-05 08:45:21
FinchSend Finch a message :   "CRITIQUE OF THE DAY" Overall, I find that the overall design of this poster is working quite effectively.
The only area that I have issues with is the type. To it's credit, the type does appear to "flow" from the illustration, so finding the text isn't the issue. The issue that I have with it is that the type seems to be too "canned" (although it is obvious that some of the characters have been altered in places).
The style of the text doesn't quite work with the style of the illustration either. I would suggest even further incorporation of the text with the illustration, possibly changing the typeface and manipulating the text so that it appears to be part of the blowing wind. That's just one suggestion.
Like I said in the beginning, overall this poster is working pretty well, but the type treatment could use some adjusting, in my opinion.
Thank you for reading the CRITIQUE OF THE DAY.
"CRITIQUE OF THE DAY" 2003 - Finch
  2003-05-05 08:13:13
brian kroekerSend brian kroeker a message :   really nice... love the colour choices and the overall looseness of it   2003-05-05 08:05:36
PediniSend Pedini a message :   Wow, Jay you continue to amaze me! Those wishing to utilize the character of screenprinting to its ultimate, take note.   2003-05-05 07:35:01
PlantweedSend Plantweed a message :   Now this is different, and interesting. The style could be developed more, keep going...   2003-05-05 06:59:38
ferrettegirlSend ferrettegirl a message :   Damn fine, A-1 Quality. This is fantastic stuff.   2003-05-05 01:03:54
needlesSend needles a message :   woah! super cool   2003-05-04 10:12:00
GrzecaSend Grzeca a message :   Jay, his is a really beautiful and odd poster! Looks reminiscent of found art/ signs/graffiti - really nice and unusual. My wife and I spent the morning driving around Chicago taking pictures of old signs and buildings- this is a great poster to see after that activity.   2003-05-04 09:32:06
Thee AlexSend Thee Alex a message :   This is superb   2003-05-04 09:26:01
jasoncrossSend jasoncross a message :   best of the new batch...thic rocks Jay, great work...solid and pro as usual!   2003-05-04 07:20:38
MeelooSend Meeloo a message :   very very nice !   2003-05-04 04:29:13
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