hmm. always another way to skin the cat. The finished product looks a bit different color wise. I laid the orange over the blue, real transparent. That made the eyes look darker, added a different spin which I like. And the blue leans more toward greenish. It's that thin line where you may think, is this the ocean, or the sky? Or, you may think, this guy's a nutjob. beh.
Maybe if the kerning had gotten spaced gradually further apart starting with Mercury and copntinuing on through to Program?
Anywho, keep up all the great work! I really enjoy seeing the Largemammal work...that's why I cared enough to comment :)
point taken, plastk. I am a bit of a stickler for type too. I usually keep the kerning pretty tight, but I thought a more open spacing would let the movement come down through the text and not create too much horizontal tension there. Plus, when I laid out the text with tighter kerning, it had to be a larger point size to fill the space side to side and that made it too heavy.
Thank you for your comments!
constructive crit is why I put my stuff up here. ...
I like the overall concept and design but I think the kearning on the type is a bit too loose and inconsistant compared to the rest of the design.
there always room for improvement and I am anal about type.