hate to add one more comment that says something about the type, but man, this poster could be killer with a different type treatment. Maybe not even hand written, just not bent and pulled in illustrator or whatever. Im against that.
It's a half fish, half robot thing I had laying around. Inspired by the creature from the black lagoon. I totally agree with the type stuff. I got lazy at the end because of deadline constraints. But I have been trying to draw type for the past three weeks because it's the weakest part of my posters.
Couldn't agree with Finch more... I really like the illo, the type is almost there, but needs to be hand rendered and ditch the Serpentine font at the bottom... that font has been used like a $3,00 whore and it's time to put it out to pasture.