THE PiNCH: Yes I agree. If I had done this one today, I would have used some kind of panel for the text. Thank you!
Rhys: Thanks! Nothing worse then people relying on the tried and true without changing it up a bit!
Steve Chanks: Thank you!
I'd have handled a few things differently, spcifically a panel device behind the text or something so she didn't look so wide or flat chested - but I mean it when I say that is a killer illustration... the club name is horrifying by the way