It's a matter of taste. I think he succeeded at what he attepted.
If it works, it's good. If it's quick, it's better.
Reminds me of the things we did in grade school.You know, scratch through the ink to show crayon underneath.
fastfood* thanks for the input ( honestly ) but, as seabury was joking,....... everything i do is pretty much rushed. this was a quicky but was pretty much the effect i was hoping for. as long as it gets people to shlep their asses thru the snow and into the club....... i'm happy.